feed back required please.

15 Sep 2005

this is an ad i have posted on the photo ads section. this is not a deliberate direction to my ad, i just need feedback on it. does it say too much, or not enough?, is the wording ok?
please any feed back would be appreciated.
MODS:- i hope i have posted in the right section. if i have not, please move as you seem fit.
ad number:- 347639

15 Sep 2005

hi there i carnt see anything wrong with add infact its one of the best i'v seen and i have seen lots on here.

15 Sep 2005

Hi,
Dont read many blokes ads - but say that was pretty good - I guess the key is to come across as genuine which i reckon you do!
For what its worth if i was that way included i would reply!!

15 Sep 2005

thanks cliff, i do appreciate all the feedback that i recieve.

15 Sep 2005

Looks a good add to me
not to long, not to short and explains everything in a nice simple straight to the point kind of way
If i was looking for a guy then i would be happy to reply smile

<<< rushes of to make my add look better lol

15 Sep 2005

hey, very good ad, love the pic! keep it up

15 Sep 2005

tallnsexy,southport, sharon and osprey, once again thanks for the feedback.
osprey, if you had read the ad, and yes it is a little long, but i like to get everything out and in the open from the offset. i do, quite clearly state my age.
as for frienships, i have already made some very good friends from meets with married couples, some i still swing with, and some that are now just very good friends.
as to what i'm looking for, well i have had no problems with the responses so far, all concerned seem pretty clear whats going on.
i clearly state in the ad the area's i travel to, and people in those areas would certainly have at least heard of hamshaws.
anyway, this is not a malicious reply to you osprey, i just wrote the ad through previous experiances, and listed all i could., but your comment on it being a bit confused

long has been taken on board....thanks frank smile