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smile overthehill :)
I wanted just to raise a smile ( for now ...!),
And dallied on this site a while,
To see if any hungry gals ,
Would have a chat and make me pals.
I seek both wit, and charm and poise,
Can any gals out-verse the boys?
lets see if any takers dare,
To pop along and converse share?
For we all are poets in our past,
yet seldom let the words just last,
A picture tells so many things,
But words are what makes our hearts sing.
So here I tried to get a smile,
From women who just look a while,
And do not want the same old crock,
About how big and stiff the c***..!
Join in this line and let us see,
Who is the best at poetry,
For it is ancient words of love,
And written by myself above.....?
confused: :?: :?: redface :?: :?: :?:
Come on girls, give the guy what he wants, lol, and boys, if you can ust put "it" down for a minute, you have a go too.
OK, how's this for a verse :shock: :
F*ck me if you're ready,
F*ck me if you can,
F*ck me like a beast,
Don't f*ck me like a man.
OK, short but to the point - don't you think?
A little short, I do agree but not well thought out don't you see...?
It is not that you haven't tried but reading it has raised no pride,
For poets try to feel the words, to raise above the mocking hurds,
And instil thought and care and meaning and hope the gals just need some leading!
Come on GALS...Surely you, of ALL the forumites love a little poetry....!
Pick up the glove...........
What are "mocking hurds"? confused
I like my poem, it says what I want it to say, and isn't that the point of all literature? Correct me if I'm wrong, but don't we all want to f*ck like beasts really :twisted: ???
I guess you are correct my friend. I was just trying to raise a little bit of conversation to the animalistic side we all desire? looking for a chat and all that? I love a good, honest poet...the mocking hurds was in reference to those who ridicule in a group someone who is different. Mark, who runs the site somewhere said about getting into conversation before the act NOT just asking for the end result? Like a courtship if you like? I was just HOPING some women, who are reputed to be both more creative and open to that would respond......! At least I know somebody reads the messages and thanks for at least chatting a while!
Foresooth, in my sights a poet I see! An end appears to the misery!
The English language she unfolds to tell her truth; if I may make so bold? But pray, do tell, what you desire? An end to loneliness by the fire? Or do I spy with my little eye some twisted linguistic perversion?
Alas for me I cannot see the point of all this damn poetry... I'd rather just have a decent fuck - but all the same I wish you good luck!
Live long, and may the Force be with you! wink
Overthehill, are you saying that women are more creative and poetic than men are? I don't think they are, but I suppose any trick is worth a try!
I'm with Gulezbabe - I'd rather have a decent, poem-free f*ck, but each to his or her own 8)
We are all here for the same thing, and foxylady is correct. I just felt it was a different approach? just putting " Wanna have a fuck", just gets no response. I was purely hoping to get some answers, any was ok...! Maybe some women still like a bit of the old fashioned talk first, me been out of it a while. But then maybe it is all the norm to be out front so to speak? me I prefer to get to know someone, but then as the name implies I am over the hill!
Now, Bluexxx, I can see where Overthehill is coming from... but it's a little hopeful trying to find a creative lady in his neck of the woods that also enjoys poetry.
Personally, I hate poetry but that's another story...
Best of luck with it, though, Overthehill.
Jxxx
Many thanks my dear. It is a dying art at times in this world of textphones and the like. It is like we have lost the art of writing things down we actually think about first? I love to write and ****, but at present writing is the 'in' thing! It seems a bit funny to think even in the second world war, the service men even sent sexy letters? We all know the SWALK, but I was well impressed when I read a book recently with N.O.R.W.I.C.H in it referring to supressed feelings. Oh me not that old, just over the hill ( 40's )......