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A Poem

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i saw the thread about poems just thought id show you mine see what you think.?
I spread my dreams before you
A carpet for your feet
Be careful where you tread my love
For they are not complete
The threads that remain unwoven
Creat a tangled mess
A mix of smoke and mirrors to cloud my consciousness
So many things devide us
So much to find out
But i know ill still love you
Though my sanity is in doubt
thats about it what does every one think ?
I think it's lovely, and I also think that you should add it to the poetry thread, then everything is kept all nice and neat and I can go back and read them all whenever I so wish smile
maybe a friendly mod willtransport it thence and lock this...
Hi Angel - I thought you were in Spain...how goes it?
Mike.
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Hi Angel - I thought you were in Spain...how goes it?
Mike.

Not yet Mike, we fly out tomorrow, and then I'll be spending a whole week like this - biggrin