Constructive Profile feedback please!

13 Mar 2009

Hi all,
Relatively new to the site having only joined as a full member recently, and am looking to improve my profile.
Very keen to hear all and any opinions, and would welcome constructive feeback.
Thanks all, appreciate it.
W

13 Mar 2009

Profile looks pretty good... only thing I'd change would be your profile pic... I'd put your six pack up there and then I'd suggest you move 331 miles north! :rascal:

Hope you have fun! :mrgreen:
DGx

13 Mar 2009

Quote by Vvvweplayboy
Hi all,
Relatively new to the site having only joined as a full member recently, and am looking to improve my profile.
Very keen to hear all and any opinions, and would welcome constructive feeback.
Thanks all, appreciate it.
W

Ooooh nooooooo not the 'V' word bolt

In edit: sorry misunderstood. Just your profile you want feedback on :doh:

13 Mar 2009

Hi honestly your profile is fantastic mate wish i was you although did your V button stick when you were thinking of a name? redface

13 Mar 2009

As near perfect as one can get!!!! wink

(Not all men can shoot straight! :wink: )

13 Mar 2009

Thanks guys, glad to hear I'm on the right track, and will change that profile pic now.
And yep, my "v" button has a mind of its own!
W

13 Mar 2009

Quote by Vvvweplayboy
Thanks guys, glad to hear I'm on the right track, and will change that profile pic now.

:thumbup:
Much as cock pics are growing on me so to speak, I like when I'm prepared for it! wink

13 Mar 2009

Thanks for the advice guys, have just discovered some old photos on the hard drive and uploaded them, have a look if you like x

13 Mar 2009

Quote by Vvvweplayboy
Thanks for the advice guys, have just discovered some old photos on the hard drive and uploaded them, have a look if you like x

I did

13 Mar 2009

:borg:
Yes - it looks fine to me too. Nice mix of fact and a little self marketing without sounding like some arrogant, up yer own arse, t**t mate - spot on.
Your cock looks somehow familiar however and having spent 2 years living down West London way we may need to get to the bottom of why and how.. and maybe even where and with who? :rascal:
Good luck - it seems by the 'quickies' on your profile you're 'winning friends and influencing people' (in the right way) already :thumbup:

14 Mar 2009

Well, what can I say? Thanks very much guys, good to know the profile's hitting the right spots. Although I am STILL getting loads and loads of mails from single bi and gay males. May have to spell out in even clearer fashion that I'm not looking for that...
In other news, saw this disclaimer on someone's profile and thought it was a good idea to put it on mine too...
WARNING: Any institution or person using this site or any of its associated sites for study or projects - You do not have my permission to use any of my profile or pictures in any form or forum both current or future. If you have or do, it will be considered a serious violation of my privacy and will be subject to legal ramifications. It is recommended that other members post a similar notice as well.

14 Mar 2009

the legal disclaimer thingy is indeed a good idea and I'm adding it to my profile as I write..
your profile seems sensible and does comfort me, as I thought mine was probably too longwinded.. I see now that people aren't scared by a few words more than average..which is good.
I still think I'm doing something wrong though, in fact..if I don't offend anybody, I'd love to hijack the topic and ask for similar feedback on the quality of my profile as well.
am I going wrong somewhere?

14 Mar 2009

Quote by Vvvweplayboy
Although I am STILL getting loads and loads of mails from single bi and gay males. May have to spell out in even clearer fashion that I'm not looking for that...

Nah, I wouldn't waste your typing. A lot of people obviously just don't read. I'm bi(ish) and all the straight men still send me mails :rascal:

14 Mar 2009

Quote by Melting_pot
I still think I'm doing something wrong though, in fact..if I don't offend anybody, I'd love to hijack the topic and ask for similar feedback on the quality of my profile as well.
am I going wrong somewhere?

OK, nice pic but I opened your profile and switched off before even starting to read the content - the WAY you've laid out the text makes it really hard to read easily - maybe change the layout, use of paragraphs etc?
Oh, and your penis is smaller than his wink

14 Mar 2009

Quote by anais
Thanks for the advice guys, have just discovered some old photos on the hard drive and uploaded them, have a look if you like x

I did

Me too :twisted:
Pity you're too young though. I'll be visiting London next month innocent

15 Mar 2009

Love your signature by the way BIoke, and yours Sassy-Seren...
And Sassy - have msg'd you about both your age restrictions...and London!
And on the subject of profiles without getting too "corporate"(!) about all of this I do think that bullet boys are a good way of conveying info succinctly without drowning people in dense text!
W

15 Mar 2009

Quote by BIoke
I still think I'm doing something wrong though, in fact..if I don't offend anybody, I'd love to hijack the topic and ask for similar feedback on the quality of my profile as well.
am I going wrong somewhere?

OK, nice pic but I opened your profile and switched off before even starting to read the content - the WAY you've laid out the text makes it really hard to read easily - maybe change the layout, use of paragraphs etc?
Oh, and your penis is smaller than his wink

Like this you mean? :mrgreen:

Quote by Melting_Pot
Please read my profile to the end... it saves us both time, embarassement and incomprehensions. I know you might find it long..but, I promise to read yours too; deal?
As the name says, I'm a mixed bag, half italian and half dutch. At 5'7", I'm probably shorter than the average englishman, but if that doesn't bother you,
rest assured I ain't bothered either..if need be, I can always bring a ladder...
I'm looking for some fun quality time with a girl (hell..make that two girls :P). I'm single, professional and have my own place. I can travel and accomodate.
My preference would go to something local, and renewable on a regular basis, but I won't shy away from one offs, as I'm still young and willing to have fun. I want to explore all things sexual, kinky and average, but I'm just not into men,
so if that's your thing, sorry, no offence, but I'm not what you're looking for..
Of course this does not include men being there, or participating... as long as direct sexual contact (other than sharing the favours of a lady) is not expected, it would just take the fun out of it for me.
I'm adventurous and very open when it comes to talking about sex... my preferences (and, I've been told, my skills) go towards oral, lots of kissess and fondling, long sessions and allnighters, as I have a high sex drive.
There is more to me than just that, but why don't you get in touch, so we can talk things over, and possibly meet?
I'm definitely a gentle Dom (in that I tend to be dominant in the bedroom...not necessarily in the BDSM sense of the word, which however is an option for experimentation), not available for mistressess unless they leave the whip in their closet and don't try to jump on my nuts (heels first, that is)...
Ideally I'm looking for somebody around my age or slightly younger, but that's not a definite rule, in either direction. I will NOT meet without previous recent pic exchange (I have cam, for confirmation, if necessary). I don't play with girls that are in a relationship unless the other partner is involved or at least informed..
If your name is Claudia Schiffer, I just might make an exception to virtually all of my rules
I'm not looking for strings, relationship or any of the like... should such a thing happpen though, I won't run away from it, it's just not the first thing I'll think of when chatting with somebody I've met here, so if that's what you're looking for, prepare to be disappointed.
Intelligent conversations will not be limited to sex (although it's so much fun, they might get back to it quite often). I've found that the mind is most often more arousing than the body, so that takes precedence, but I'll always be a sucker for a pretty face.
Thank you for your patience, and now get in touch already!
A.
P.S. I should have called myself STRAIGHT-MALE-MELTINGPOT, as I seem to attract more male attention than anything else. come on, girls, where are you?

15 Mar 2009

Yes, and I see he's changed it now so I'm glad my advice was helpful - next we'll be shagging and then he'll be really perfect! cool

IN EDIT: OH, he hasn't - I'm damn SURE he had - bet he will though wink

15 Mar 2009

Quote by Vvvweplayboy
Love your signature by the way BIoke, and yours Sassy-Seren...

But tits and lady-bits aside, mine's still the best right? :rascal:

15 Mar 2009

Did you star in 'Boogie Nights'??? smile

15 Mar 2009

fabulous profile ya know where ya stand nothin left out just means i gotta go on a bloody diet to stand a cat in hells chance :violin:
oh sod it i'll have to pass i loves me choccie too much :giggle:

15 Mar 2009

Your profile and pics were pretty spot on to start with. Only needed a litle tweaking to reach perfection. The profile is very well written and informative. An excellent example to others.
Having seen your pics going to throw in the towel. Hope not to see a pic of it hanging on you as you're making the ladies pant already.
Thinking of using the v word on my profile too.
Nvwe, Not Very Well Endowed. biggrin

15 Mar 2009

Quote by BIoke
Love your signature by the way BIoke, and yours Sassy-Seren...

But tits and lady-bits aside, mine's still the best right? :rascal:
but mine's more enticing flipa

15 Mar 2009

Your profile and pics were pretty spot on to start with. Only needed a litle tweaking to reach perfection. The profile is very well written and informative. An excellent example to others.
Having seen your pics going to throw in the towel. Hope not to see a pic of it hanging on you as you're making the ladies pant already.
Thinking of using the v word on my profile too.
Nvwe, Not Very Well Endowed. biggrin

15 Mar 2009

Your signature's not the only thing that's enticing Sassy, that ass looks seriously inviting too...

15 Mar 2009

Quote by BIoke
OK, nice pic but I opened your profile and switched off before even starting to read the content - the WAY you've laid out the text makes it really hard to read easily - maybe change the layout, use of paragraphs etc?
Oh, and your penis is smaller than his

right...I've taken on board what you said, reshuffled the text and split it up a bit, in order to make it sorta readable..still too long, but..whatever...this will have to do.
thanks for the imput.
as for the penis...well..good for him lol

15 Mar 2009

Quote by Sassy-Seren
but mine's more enticing

Yes but you have an unfair advantage Sassy... lady-parts! wink

Although if we joined forces, based on his profile, he's clearly up for negotiation cool

Quote by Melting_pot
right...I've taken on board what you said, reshuffled the text and split it up a bit, in order to make it sorta readable..still too long, but..whatever...this will have to do.

Much better IMHO - good luck smile

15 Mar 2009

I think your profile is fantastic.
Anybody with a thick 9 incher, who's trying to convince the girlies (only the girlies??) that anal won't hurt has got to be big into fantasies!
Apart from that I'm impressed by the level of sublety it contains. wink

Good luck.
To any doubters out there - this is constructive feedback. If anyone wanted to stick anything that big up my arse I'd run a mile. I suspect the sentiment is shared by others.
Am I jealous - but of course!!
.

15 Mar 2009

Quote by westerross
I suspect the sentiment is shared by others.

NEVER suspect/assume anything tune :rascal:
x

15 Mar 2009

Yeah ok Tune, perhaps I am fighting a losing battle on that front, but being a bit of an ass fetishist (women only BIoke!) I owe it to myself to at least try??!
And honestly, these moaning women, how hard can taking a 9" cock in your ass seriously be? wink

I await the inevitable abuse! lol lol