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My adverts had over 240 Views and only 1 Email.
Have also replyed to 4 Adverts But no reply back.
Any tips u guys n girls can give.
Shell i Take the Cock pic out?
Gohan
The cock pic may or may not work, the girls can answer that one. Try and improve the spelling - it makes it easier for people to read.
Perhaps the person may not want to be referred to as a 'fuck buddy' - not the nicest of compliments.
Try thinking about what you have asked for and what you are telling people about yourself. What's relevant and what's not.
If you want to re-write it, I'm happy to check it over for you and give you some feedback. There's no such thing as the perfect ad, but you do need to make it appeal to a broader spectrum of viewers to get the best results.
Best of luck.
Mal
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Gohan, I replied to you last time you complained about getting no replies and you haven't changed your ad. You should listen to me, I'm wise rotflmao :rotflmao: :rotflmao: (I'm laughing before everyone else does :silly: )
Right have Changed it any thing esle?
Remember............Blue is wise!!! lol :lol:
The spelling is still terrible, it's very hard to read because of that. How about copying and pasting it into Word (if you have it) and running the spell check on it?
Jags i have just copy n pasted in word and now Changed all the mistakes i cant see any more right?
Don't mention lice to me, I've just broken another nit comb :shock: wink
Taken the cock pic out and nothing.
I replyed to 5 ads.
2 Emails were crap, the emails bonnced back, other 3 havent reply mabye its because there are not alot of Women in the Surrey/Kent Area.?
:sleeping:
Gohan wrote,
"mabye its because there are not alot of Women in the Surrey/Kent Area.?"
Yeah... that must be it,
Gordon.
rofl rotflmao:rotflmao::rotflmao::rotflmao::rotflmao:
FFS?
:cry: Fine i will shut up next time.
Very sorry Gohan,
The "not a lot of women in the Surry/Kent area?" Thing kinda got me.
I blame the Stella Artois, shouldn't be allowed to drive a machine like this after that many..
I haven't seen your ad so I couldn't possibly comment, post a link and I'll help you out as much as I can lol
Apologies again,
Ben x
Didn't see the ad thing in your sig :doh: *stops drinking*
:silly: Must be more thn the cock pic putting 'em off, hey Gohan?
It seems from your ad you have confused this place with a lonely hearts club.
As for bouncing emails, that's what you get with msn users.
Here today, gone a bit later.
For lonely hearts ads, your local papers personal section is a goer.
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Hi
If you do not get any other offers you can always cum my way!!!!!
TS
Quote by Gohan
Taken the cock pic out and nothing.
I replyed to 5 ads.
2 Emails were crap, the emails bonnced back, other 3 havent reply mabye its because there are not alot of Women in the Surrey/Kent Area.?

Gohan
I have had a look at your ad. To be Frank, (instead of Earnest!! mmmm.....Frank Bilko?) Sorry, to be frank, your ad is no different to any of the hundreds of other ads there. It doesn't show off your obvious wit and charisma and if I was a gorgeous blonde woman with pert, natural breasts, an hour glass figure with one of those bums that looks great in jeans, swinging from side to side as I walk down the road, causing van drivers to beep their horn and shout pleasantries to me as they speed past on their , I became distracted there!!! Anyway, that woman I became wouldn't look at it twice. ( This is all in my humble opinion, by the way.)
I feel you would be much better off spending more time getting involved in the Forum, showing off your obvious talents.
lol :lol:
Doh.
Cheers 4 al lthe helpfull coments people.
I will try to post on the Forum more, but i doubt it will help. But will try smile
I'm new to this, but your add does seem to ramble on a bit,
Be more confident, everybody likes a confident man yum yum. lol