My story is up!

7 Feb 2005

Wow, I never thought it would be approved so quickly and was also wondering about its length as I had a look at some stories and they are short and sweet. Did any of you had a chance to read it? I'd appreciate comments by PM and even suggestions to what you'd like to read in the future. Thanks!
A Day of Shame

7 Feb 2005

Quote by Tania
Wow, I never thought it would be approved so quickly and was also wondering about its length as I had a look at some stories and they are short and sweet. Did any of you had a chance to read it? I'd appreciate comments by PM and even suggestions to what you'd like to read in the future. Thanks!

We read it, yes.
There's clearly a lot of passion and romance ticking away inside you.
Well done.

7 Feb 2005

Wow Tania!
can you excuse me please while I go for a lie down redface

:twisted:

7 Feb 2005

Nice stry itwill keep me up during my night shift and a Nice disclammer at the end which leaves us with the real question.
How do you like your cavities touched?

7 Feb 2005

Very good... bloody good :P . You clearly have talent. Looking forward to the next one. hump

7 Feb 2005

Quote by drawist
Nice stry itwill keep me up during my night shift and a Nice disclammer at the end which leaves us with the real question.
How do you like your cavities touched?

7 Feb 2005

Phew! :notes: :rascal: Fab story!

7 Feb 2005

What can I say but :thumbup:

7 Feb 2005

Thanks everyone and special thanks to the people who PMed me with constructive criticism.
New story coming up, titled 'Turkish Delight'. Use your imagination as to what that might be about... biggrin

8 Feb 2005

Quote by vodka_babe22uk
mmmmmmmmmmm turkish delight i could eat a bar of that now
someone nip to tescos for me plz
voddy xxxx

Do they still make that stuff confused

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8 Feb 2005

excellent story Tania
right until the end I was wondering if it was true or not because you painted so vivid a picture confused

8 Feb 2005

I've just noticed they have introduced a search facility on the stories section now, very good! Now everyone can go and check out my stories without them disappearing after they slip off page 1 biggrin

Looking forward to some Turkish Delight tania, although the stories are meant to be about sex rather than chocolate wink

Just thought a bit of constructive criticism might be in order there lol

8 Feb 2005

MQ
The story is up but not showing, so if you do a search for "Tania", you should locate it.
(The search box was an excellent idea of the site owners! My compliments to them.)
Read the story first and then tell me if you would not go after some Turkish Delight yourself. It is not all about sex, you know wink

8 Feb 2005

Quote by MQ
I've just noticed they have introduced a search facility on the stories section now, very good! Now everyone can go and check out my stories without them disappearing after they slip off page 1
Looking forward to some Turkish Delight tania, although the stories are meant to be about sex rather than chocolate Just thought a bit of constructive criticism might be in order there

But surely sex and chocolate are on the same pleasure zone wavelength?

8 Feb 2005

foxylady
Yes they both release endorphins into our system! Blessed endorphins that make us happy!

8 Feb 2005

It's not working Tania, just looked it up and it's in the search but when I click 'read more' there is nothing there sad

9 Feb 2005

Quote by MQ
It's not working Tania, just looked it up and it's in the search but when I click 'read more' there is nothing there

Hmm, checked it out myself after I saw your message and it is not even showing now! I think everything that bears the Tania signature is doomed in this place. Somebody up there hates me with a passion. rolleyes

9 Feb 2005

I had a day of shame following a Turkish delight (in the form of a large doner)...
spent the best part of the next day sat on the shi....never mind that..
Only joking Tania...excellent story...shame the second didnt make an appearance :cry:
But keep it up.. wink

:wink: :wink:

11 Feb 2005

Turkish Delight is now back on. The Gods must be looking at me favourably today smile

Also wrote another story taking things a little bit further. Still not sure if I should use crude language or make it nice and romantic though. They definitely need a lot of work done on them.
Regards

11 Feb 2005

You could try writing it both ways tania, one version with the romantic slant, the other with the rude stuff then see which one get people horny quicker biggrin