need your opinion please....critique from the SH hoards

27 Jun 2005

lost the old ad.....so had to do a new one... 315519
honestly what do you think??? possibly too "chummy" ??????
sean xxxxxxxxxxx

27 Jun 2005

nope the adds just fine....just like u :grin:

27 Jun 2005

Perfect ad biggrin

:D

27 Jun 2005

Hi Sean
Great advert....try not to lose this one!!

27 Jun 2005

Sounds just about right to me hunni kiss

Kitty xxx

27 Jun 2005

Sean.... your ad sounds great. So much better and more personal than others.... well done!
biggrin

27 Jun 2005

You forgot to include the obligatory picture of your genetalia...

27 Jun 2005

Eh, Sean.
Just got it all wrong, aintcha, mate?
As Roger, quite rightly, pointed out, you have neglected to show us your penis.
You have also neglected to include the words "heavy cummer" or "quick repeater".
You have not told us the dimensions of your penis, either.
In other words, me dearie.... it's a perfect ad. Don't change a thing.
V
X

28 Jun 2005

great add

) if it wasnt for the fact ur in newcastle we would respond:)
matt
oh and the fact i hate ppl being talller than me ..silly i know it just hurts my neck :P

28 Jun 2005

well,,,,always thought about doing an add, but never had any realy thought about it, but yours was really rather good smile

so if I ever do :P Won't "Copy", yours, but be honest, and no be daft like half of them on here :P

28 Jun 2005

Don't know you fabio but youv got a good ad there. Sense you're a bit of an old romantic or warm hearted kinda guy. Sure you'll get a response from that fella. And look!! it isn't a one liner! that's rare

28 Jun 2005

thanks guys.. thought about putting in the cock shot for all of about 2 seconds!!! lol

:lol: :lol:
i have got this one saved to no chance of losing this one....i am not spending hours on another one!!!! smile

sean xxxxx

28 Jun 2005

:thumbup:
Good ad Sean smile

28 Jun 2005

Nice ad Sean, not too 'matey' but none of that 'I am a sex god' shite. lol

28 Jun 2005

nice add sean very honest and sincere :happy: :swingingchair:

28 Jun 2005

Good work mate - hope it brings you some friends and maybe more in the near future.

28 Jun 2005

Quote by fabio grooverider
thanks guys.. thought about putting in the cock shot for all of about 2 seconds!!! :lol: :lol:
sean xxxxx

Yeah, but babe... now I wanna see. rolleyes

Post the cock pic here, instead. No-one else will see.
Just me.
Promise.

28 Jun 2005

Well, if Fabio is not going to post a cock picy, I will do it on his behalf! Just click the link below to see a picture of Fabio's cock, and as you will see it is a very fine cock lol

By the way, fantastic new advert!
Sorry but could not resist doing this

28 Jun 2005

lovely add u got there Fabio ill give it um................10/10!!!
Suze xxx

28 Jun 2005

Pile o shite mate, get real man, women dont wanna know about all that rubbish, they want to know how your gonna nail em hard n fast , wipe yer dick on there dress when youve finished and thank you for your services. And not even a cock pic! confused

with the heading,,,,"10inches of throbbing grissle" biggrin

:D youve got a lot to learn young man
Belting add Sean :thumbup:

28 Jun 2005

a bit harsh on sean smackbottom

:happy: :swingingchair:

28 Jun 2005

Quote by B_Girl
a bit harsh on sean
:happy: :swingingchair:

I think that was awind up if you look at the very last line.
As a straight male looking for new and 'interesting' lady friends I thought it was refreshingly honest and must surely appeal to (most) women more than the usual exaggerated rubbish that you see in the 'latest' section.
WARNING: thread highjack in bound:
any comments on mine as we're all in a mood for mutual support (not as good as Fabio's) 306654
Cheers JD

28 Jun 2005

yeh i know :giggle:

28 Jun 2005

Great Ad, Fabio. It really came across as sincere and genuine. I also like the pictures as they were all very casual and not too posey.
As for thinking that you are old at the age of 30, I have a spare jar of eye cream if you want to borrow some.....

28 Jun 2005

well done sean your add proves that u are genuine thats a big thing for us ladies when looking for a single male good luck hope u get lots of replies wink

:wink: :wink:
Bunnies

28 Jun 2005

Great Ad sean babes biggrin

29 Jun 2005

I liked it - and I hope it brings you some decent replies. Good on you, my man! Well written and it comes over as very thoughtful.
...and you've managed to get some quality 'free' advertising in the forums as well - cool!!
Good luck & can I have the email addresses of the ladies who respond but are too far south, please? hehe

29 Jun 2005

Hi Sean...
The ad does remind me of your first ad .... which is why I actually asked to come to the north east munch in the first place.
I'd read it and thought - oh good here's a guy I could chat to and ask advice of - he seems friendly and sincere and not the 'do I need a body guard with me ' type.
And I would imagine that the lovely ladies on here would feel the same.
In fact if I wasn't str8 - I'm sure I'd reply to it.
Just wish I'd done one as nice.
Regards
Atlantis