please help

16 Jul 2005

hi there genuine guy loking for like mided peeps have profile that needs feedback on please help.

16 Jul 2005

Ok, in all honesty?
You look like you'd hit me, soon as shag me, in your pics.
Could you perhaps... smile?
Sorry, but you did ask.

16 Jul 2005

Nothing wrong with the wording but as Vix says, the pics don't look very friendly.
You look a miserable bugger :lol2:

16 Jul 2005

Quote by Dawn_Mids
Nothing wrong with the wording but as Vix says, the pics don't look very friendly.
You look a miserable bugger :lol2:

:laughabove: :laughabove: :laughabove: :laughabove:
Im scared :scared:

16 Jul 2005

Yeah the wording is OK but have to agree the pics have a certain Dennis Neilson quality about them ........sorry . Easily remedied though ey .
Good Luck With It .

17 Jul 2005

hanks so far to the people that have helped me sort my page out.

17 Jul 2005

Quote by nfcrowley2k5
hanks so far to the people that have helped me sort my page out.

What a brave man you are asking people to be honest about your profile :shock: wink

But hey, you done the right thing, you dont find anything out if you dont ask confused

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:!:
Hope you get what you are looking for :!:

17 Jul 2005

Hi NF
Have seen the before and after, well done on the top pic - much better!
I would say, lose the bottom picture, you dont need it, I would have thought a well written ad and a smiling picture would do the trick. Having said that, what do I know?
Good luck!
lol

17 Jul 2005

Yeah, actually.... I'd probably suggest that guys may be best to leave the cock pic til it is asked for. I like them :twisted: but I know a lot don't and are put off by a willy staring them right in the face when they are trying to read! Yeah, yeah, I know it's a swingers site but poeple do like to know about the person first!

17 Jul 2005

Quote by bluexxx
Yeah, actually.... I'd probably suggest that guys may be best to leave the cock pic til it is asked for. I like them :twisted: but I know a lot don't and are put off by a willy staring them right in the face when they are trying to read! Yeah, yeah, I know it's a swingers site but poeple do like to know about the person first!

yes agree with blue on that one, leave out the cock picture until your asked for it, otherwise a decent profile.
the only other thing I can suggest is pad the profile out a bit, so when peeps do a keyword search your name will come up a bit more frequentley. Think about words that peeps will search for and try and include them in your profile (hope that makes sense)
kaz xx

18 Jul 2005

thanks to all that have helped with this if anyone else can help then please do

18 Jul 2005

Its a nice ad babe !
Good luck and Happy Hunting xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

18 Jul 2005

The picture is a big improvement on before.........
The ad.... as previously mentioned just needs a bit more padding... more details... it really helps people to know and make decisions on whether or not they wish to know more about you..... then they'll maybe take it further and start chatting to you....
Best of luck... hope you find what you're looking for......
equi-princess xxx

18 Jul 2005

The Anon email system is the site's condom - it prevents irritations

Steph
I like that, and never thought of it that way before lol

18 Jul 2005

Quote by Nigel
and have bee told that I am W/E.

Well, if a bee told you, I for one am not impressed!
wink

Chris

20 Jul 2005

Thank you so much to all that have helped in making my profile quite frankly a lot better that it was.
Nigel

20 Jul 2005

hi hope you enjoy the site and have lots of fun :happy: :happy: :swingingchair:

20 Jul 2005

Quote by Vix
Ok, in all honesty?
You look like you'd hit me, soon as shag me, in your pics.
Could you perhaps... smile?
Sorry, but you did ask.

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

:rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: biggrin

what vix said

20 Jul 2005

By far the best one I've seen is Dambusters, it's not pushy, it's amusing and informative.

20 Jul 2005

Quote by marmalaid
By far the best one I've seen is Dambusters, it's not pushy, it's amusing and informative.

i agree a very good add well done Unc D!!!
kiss

louxxxx

20 Jul 2005

Quote by marmalaid
By far the best one I've seen is dambuster's

Well, if that don't get me laid; I don't know what will rotflmao

Marms - YOO da man ! !
Seriously tho'
I think it's more a question of letting yourselfcome across. Both here in the forum and in any Photo Ad. One needs to run with and hopefully compliment the other.
After all, how many times have we heard it said "We shag/play with the person, not the just the cock/pussy" ??

20 Jul 2005

Quote by marmalaid
By far the best one I've seen is Dambusters, it's not pushy, it's amusing and informative.

It certainly reads better than most ...................
equi-princess xxx